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Friday, March 4, 2016

Borrowing Words and Ideas: An Option for Writing


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Sally inspired me today. She is my birthday sister. Here is what she wrote about her mentors: 


"Thanks, Fran McVeigh for teaching me this poetry format who learned it from Erin Baker’s “Since Last March” found here."


Today I will borrow from the others who wrote before me. 


Since last May 

I turned 45 
A few blinks it seems
Another year
Numbers increasing 
Time decreasing
Oh how things change.
Didn't step foot on a plane
nor cross state lines.
My first born baby worked
all year long
turned 17 
lives at the gym
looks like a grown man
and will file taxes.
My baby turns 15
Hasn't grown an inch 
Feisty as ever
Still strong
Since last May, 

Mistakes were made 
Scarred but thankful, 
I say:
Goodbye blame
I'm still standing
Hello 46. 

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Like Sally, I used the stems from Fran's poem:

I’ve taken a trip to…
My baby turned…
Good-bye to…
Hello to...

5 comments:

  1. Inspired ... I might give it a go! I have a goal of trying different formats this month. It is amazing how much you can learn about something from so few words and how much more I want to know. Thank you for sharing.
    Clare

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    1. Thank you Clare. You inspire me too!

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  2. Nice! I like how you used the stems to build your poem!

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  3. Wow! I really enjoyed that way you shared your slice!
    Powerful.

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